Wednesday 6 February 2013

Crushed



A silent blow, A soundless shatter

A million pieces strewn around

The wound is deep

An invisible bleeding

The mind all mangled in memories of past

And the pain of present

This wasn’t meant to me, I repeat to myself

It was a perfect union of mind, body and soul

Yet it is no more






  
A silent blow, A soundless shatter

A straying tear on my cheek

An unexplainable hollow

A sting and throbbing ache

How I wish I had not let my heart go

And had kept it in shackles of steel

But then in the guarded fortress

I’d never know what true love feels



A silent blow, A soundless shatter

And pieces of the my heart in a disarray

I know I have felt love

But I wish I could share it with the one

Who made me blissful like a child

But now has crushed me inside

Will I ever be able to pick up all the broken pieces

Will it ever mend again and be whole

And how will I ever fill my empty soul



A silent blow, A soundless shatter

And now my world will never be the same again…….
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12 comments:

  1. Rimly6 February 2013 at 22:54

    Fiona this poem is heart wrenching. It truly expresses a broken heart. But hope is never lost my friend. Love all manages to sneak into our lives when we least expect it. Keep writing poetess.

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  2. Unknown7 February 2013 at 00:33

    I know. I poured my heart out and I am glad u liked it. you strong belief in hope is admirable and I hope I never lose faith too. Thanks and do read on

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  3. Unknown7 February 2013 at 00:57

    :( nice one fiona

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  4. Unknown7 February 2013 at 01:05

    Thanx Raina. I am glad you like it

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  5. Unknown7 February 2013 at 01:11

    yesss u will b pick up n join it up.... chheerrzzzz

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  6. Unknown7 February 2013 at 02:15

    Thank you thomson. You are my rock

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  7. Unknown7 February 2013 at 20:21

    According to George Crane, 'the human body has one ability not possessed by machines - the ability to repair itself'

    Best of Luck!!!

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  8. Unknown7 February 2013 at 21:31

    True Luiza. Physical healing is a gradual process and the scars may remain. The healing of the heart and soul too is gradual but it requires acceptance of the Now. Most of the time that is what makes moving on and healing a painful process. Letting go sometimes is more difficult than holding on.

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  9. Anonymous9 February 2013 at 18:56

    Fiona, this poem perfectly depicts the pain of having loved and lost and the shattered sense of self that is oftentimes left behind. I loved the imagery and the tone of nostalgia and longing. A broken heart come to life! Lovely! :)

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    1. Unknown10 February 2013 at 21:06

      Thanx Bella, Just scribbled my heart out. I am glad you liked it.

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  10. Privy Trifles10 February 2013 at 23:31

    Very touching!!

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    1. Unknown11 February 2013 at 03:38

      Thank you very much. Please do visit again

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